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剑桥雅思大作文开辟录(剑8)

2017-03-29 11:58
择要:以下便是100留学为各人整理的剑桥雅思大作文开辟录(剑8)。盼望对列位考生的备考有所协助:

  以下便是100留学为各人整理的剑桥雅思大作文开辟录(剑8)。盼望对列位考生的备考有所协助:

  剑8(4套)

  C8T1

  Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.

  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

  C8T2

  Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.

  In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?

  Has this become a positive or negative development?

  C8T3

  Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

  To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  What other measures do you think might be effective?

  C8T4

  In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.

  What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

  与剑7差别,剑8大作文的题干长度规复到正常形态。但是剑8作文标题最大的特性表现在“综合”两个字上。比方(C8T2)In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?,这就相称于report范例+agree范例。再比方

  (C8T3)To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?,相称于调查agree范例+report范例中的solutions剖析。以是要求考生对每品种型作文的构造“必需”十分熟习,才干灵敏地使用到这种综合类的作文。

  别的,C8T1通知我们discuss范例仍需赐与肯定的存眷,C8T4也提示考生留意report范例构造(即:扫尾——缘由剖析——处理方案——开头)。此中C8T1还给出了满分的考官范文,固然说考官的范文很难学习很难模拟,但是单从言语的角度来讲,孩子们照旧可以取得许多语料上的积聚,尤其是表达的隧道性方面。那么怎样应用考官范文提拔本人的隧道表达才能呢?给我个时机,我讲给你听。

  step1:用正常的中文翻译考官范文

  step2:依据本人翻译的中文做汉译英训练

  step3:比较原文,细致剖析差别呈现的缘由

  step4:保存修正陈迹和差别剖析,作为温习重点内容。

  一切着四个步调只为到达一个目标,便是尽能够找到中英表达上的差别,并习气性地灵敏转换。以是孩子们给本人点工夫和方案多多积聚native speakers写的好文章。

  留意哦!!!以下给出实践操纵的典范:  混淆类

  剑8T3

  Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

  To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  What other measures do you think might be effective?

  MODEL ANSWER

  There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become the huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere. Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol. (39)

  无须置疑,交通东西所带来的交通和净化题目曾经在都会和机动车道上形成了不小的困扰。处理这些题目不克不及只靠单纯地提拔油价来完成。

  While it is undeniable that private car use is one of the main causes of the increase in traffic and pollution, higher fuel costs are unlikely to limit the number of drivers for long. As this policy would also affect the cost of the public transport, it would be very unpopular with everyone who needs to travel on the roads. But there are various other measures that could be implemented that would have a huge effect on these problems. (79)

  固然私人车的运用无疑是形成拥堵和净化的次要缘由之一,但是更高的油价也不行能临时克制私人车主的数目。并且由于这种办法也会影响到大众交通价钱,以是并不合适每个需求出行的人。但是,照旧有许多对此有明显结果的其他方法的。

  I think to tackle the problem of pollution, cleaner fuel need to be developed. The technology is already available to produce electric cars that would be both quieter and cleaner to use. Persuading manufacturers and traveler to adopt this new technology would be more effective strategy for improving air quality, especially in cities.(53)

  However, traffic congestion will not be solved by changing the type of private vehicle people can use. To do this, we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to travelers. For example, if sufficient sky trains and underground trains systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities, then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced. Long-distance train and coach services should be made attractive and affordable alternatives to driving your own car for long journeys.(81)

  In conclusion, I think that long-term traffic and pollution reductions would depend on educating the public to use public transport more, and on governments using public money to construct and run efficient systems.(33)

  285 words

  仅曩昔两段为例,剩余局部请孩子们本人来练练手。

  step1:翻译成正常的中文

  step2:将翻译好的汉语翻译成“本人的”英语,此处以第二段为例:

  固然私人车的运用无疑是形成拥堵和净化的次要缘由之一,但是更高的油价也不行能临时克制私人车主的数目。并且由于这种办法也会影响到大众交通价钱,以是并不合适每个需求出行的人。但是,照旧有许多对此有明显结果的其他方法的。

  Although one of the main reasons of traffic jam and pollution is the use of private cars, it is impossible to control the number of private car drivers in a long term. It is not suitable for everyone who need to travel because this method will affect the price of public transportation. However, there are many other effective measures to solve the problem.

  step3:比照+剖析(可以逐句剖析)

  考官:While it is undeniable that private car use is one of the main causes of the increase in traffic and pollution, higher fuel costs are unlikely to limit the number of drivers for long.

  我:Although one of the main reasons of traffic jam and pollution is the use of private cars, it is impossible to control the number of private car drivers in a long term.

  (1)语序——While it is undeniable that private car use is one of the main causes of the increase in traffic and pollution……

  (2)用词——although & while; impossible & unlikely; control & limit(更详细一些)

  (3)简便——in a long term & for long

  ……

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